1st edit
2nd edit:
Deb watched the second one and gave feedback
- sound problem when pouring pasta into pot.
- walking upstairs sounds too clinky on the mic.
- cut start of plate & table shot as can tell Mark is being directed what to do.
- Mark laughing in one shot.
- door shutting & banging on walls is confusing.
- play on the tension.
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