Edited Versions

1st edit



2nd edit:



Deb watched the second one and gave feedback
- sound problem when pouring pasta into pot.
- walking upstairs sounds too clinky on the mic.
- cut start of plate & table shot as can tell Mark is being directed what to do.
- Mark laughing in one shot.
- door shutting & banging on walls is confusing.
- play on the tension.

Photos from Harry on day of shoot

Updated Schedule

opening credits music?

Title Sequence

For our title sequence we are going to have overlayed digital text, we will have this over the top of the slow shots at the start of the film which show monty making his way to the flat. we will cut back and forth between monty and agnew, monty shots will be all about the sound and the detail establishing that he is making dinner, we dont want any text here because we want the focusto be on the sound, when we cut to monty the shots will be slower and darker and this is where we will place our titles, we are hoping to find some good music to overlay to this part of our film. After looking at anumber of title sequences Deborah suggested this one and i really like how it remains dark throughout, and think our title would work well like this with the right music.

Poster for Herds

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Ideas for music.

For the romantic music heres a couple of ideas...

Prince - Purple Rain

Barry White - Cant Get Enough of Your Love

Bryan Adams - Everything I do

just a few, still working on the tense music.